Prompt fic: Topping a Top

[charisstoma]

Title: Topping a Top.
Author: charisstoma
Word count: 551
Frogs_of_War's Prompt: ...the only thing tops are used to submitting to, relatively speaking, is bottoms...



Thayne sized up Derrick wondering how they were going to do this. There was nothing wrong with Derrick, no nothing at all, he was prime meat but he was also a top. “Houston. We have a problem,” he muttered.

A laugh brought Thayne’s eyes back up to Derrick’s face. “We’re both intelligent men, we can work this out. Subs can do it with each other, admittedly it won’t be as easy but,” Derrick shrugged, “why not us if we’re creative? It’s just a matter of perspective.”

A slow smile spread across Thayne’s face, “Something like topping from the bottom but we’ll both be trying to top the other. One of us supine shoving our cock up the one riding above who is also trying to control the action.”

“Exactly. It’ll be a competition to see who gets the other off first,” Derrick grinned. “Winner gets to fuck the other if he’s not already doing it until he cums or the loser can cum again.”

“We’re going to need lots of lube for this,” Thayne said reaching into the bedside drawer for a gallon sized bottle with push down dispenser. “We flip a coin to see who is on the bottom?” he grinned.

“I brought just the coin,” and Derrick pulled out the disk. “Simon gave it to me.”

Thayne reached for it and turned it over in his hand to examine the coin. “You look at it?”

“Nope,” Derrick answered. “Asked Simon for the coin I flip when I give him two choices of how I’ll do him. He calls out what he wants if it’s heads or tails. Works for us. I figured if you and I had a problem it might be the way to go about deciding things. I wanted to be prepared.”

Laughing, Thayne flipped the coin. “I wonder if Ian used this same little trick. Our subs are sneaky little shits and they’re friends.”

“Yeah, if I hadn’t lost the coin toss this last time I wouldn’t be here with you trying to do this,” Derrick scowled.

“To make this honest, I’ll flip and you call top or bottom,” Thayne said with a smirk.

“It’s my coin, I think I should be the one who does the flipping,” Derrick argued. “You should have brought your own coin otherwise.”

“Oh that wouldn’t be fair at all, now that I’ve seen your coin,” Thayne chortled. “Take a peak,” he said flipping the coin over to Derrick. “Damn thing is two headed and I’m betting that the one Ian and I use is too.”

“Why those little conniving…” Derrick started and then laughed as Thayne joined him, “and we love them for it.”

“You know a bet won dishonestly is null and void with repercussions involved,” Derrick started.

Thayne grinned, “but now we know how it’s done imagine what we can do with this knowledge.”

Derrick nodded grinning, “we can make them squirm, well more than normal,” then he sobered, “but what do we do about this? We see it through?”

“Yep.” Thayne said. “We’re men of our word and I think as a one-off it could be interesting and then there are some real bottoms that need seeing to.”

“Hmmm,” Derrick agreed, “when we’ve got our strength back, which might be sometime next week. They’ll both hate that.”

Comments

[frogs_of_war]

Thanks.

Talking it through is good.

A gallon sized container with a pump is... about 18" tall. What kind of drawer did he have it in and how does he find anything else in there?

Do you think his sub would have let him look at both sides of the coin if this wasn't exactly the outcome he wanted? Well maybe not the week without (although I don't think these two would last a week), but the repercussions.

What could they possibly do that their subs wouldn't like? They might decide to refuse to top, but I don't think either could keep in up long. Not unless they tied themselves to the bed and made their subs do all the work. Which could easily leave one or both sitting there naked for a while while their subs finish that show they're watching. Or their subs doing that one thing that gets the tops going quickly, but is uncomfortable or awkward, so to tops don't like doing it.

[(Anonymous)]

*grins* I was thinking one of those pseudo nightstands/filing cabinets with two drawers where the bottom is a file holder. Plenty of room to store toys.

Have no idea what the subs wouldn't like. *grins*

[charisstoma.livejournal.com]

Yeah that's me up there commenting back. *sighs*

[frogs_of_war]

I'm game to write one, but it's going to take a bit because I work ALL the time.

Derrick + Simon, Thayne + Ian, right?'

I'm going to say that was Saturday.


Tuesday evening - texting

Derrick: Three days. I'm not gonna last

Thayne: You will

Derrick: We had friend chicken tonight and he's licking his fingers.

Thayne: Devious. Stay strong

Derrick: I'll try


Work first, then Wednesday's part...

[charisstoma.livejournal.com]

It is rough being a top when your bottom has you by the balls.

[frogs_of_war]

Wednesday - texting

Derrick: He's

Thayne: What?

Derrick: He's made huge cone of peppermint ice cream and it melted all over him and I can't lick it off

Thayne: I'm sure he wants you to

Derrick: No. He has to come on to me

Derrick: Oh no

Thayne: What?

Derrick: He just used his peppermint covered hand to adjust himself. He knows how much I love peppermint off his skin. Cold shower. Cold shower

[charisstoma.livejournal.com]

Very rough.

[frogs_of_war]

Thursday - texting

Thayne: To you think they're getting it elsewhere

Derrick: No

Thayne: Ian is too please by half.

Derrick: I'd agree. Simon's libido is even larger than mine, but tonight he laid out on our bed and jerked himself off.

Thayne: Ian's walking around in a towel that keeps falling off.

Derrick: Right in front of me.

Thyane: Ouch. And I thought I had it bad

[charisstoma.livejournal.com]

Thayne is being so resilient. *grins*
Simon and Ian are probably having their own texting conversation about this. They are evil.

[frogs_of_war]

Friday - texting

Derrick: Are you still up?

Thayne: What's up?

Derrick: I decided to cuff myself to the bed and offer myself to him.

Thayne: Yeah

Derrick: And he kissed my cheek, finished watching his show and rolled over and went to sleep

Thayne: No

Derrick: Yes

Thayne: How did you get out?

Derrick: I thrashed about until he woke up and uncuffed me. I'm never trying that again.

Thayne: Why don't you try talking to him?

Derrick: He's back asleep

Thayne: Tomorrow?

Derrick: Maybe. Goodnight

[charisstoma.livejournal.com]

*nods* Yes. The bottoms have control of all the balls.

[frogs_of_war]

Saturday - phone

"And then I told him it just wasn't fair," Derrick said. Then he said I got the results I wanted, so what was I complaining about?"

"It's the spirit of the thing." Thayne settled gingerly on the couch. He had a while until Ian was done getting dressed for their dinner out.

"Totally." Derrick paused. "How are things at your end?"

He hadn't asked this once the entire week.

"Well…"

"Yeah?"

"Well, the falling towel really wore me down."

"You gave in?" Derrick sounded indignant. "How could you? Why didn't you tell me? I thought we had an understanding."

"I didn't just give in!" How could he think that? "I talked to Ian."

"And?"

"And I told him that…" That Thayne felt unattractive because Ian never initiated anything. "I told him I wanted to be come on to. And he ask what I thought he'd been doing all week with the poses and the walking around mostly naked and all."

"And?"

"So we made out for a while."

"And?"

"And we lost our clothes along the way." Very slowly, which was a nice change of pace.

"And?"

"And he introduced asswork, which I don't like." It got Thayne going too fast. "But I couldn't complain as I'd pretty much asked for it."

"And?"

"And he asked me if I wanted to move on to something I was more comfortable with."

"What did you do?" Derrick was breathless.

"I wanted to say yes, but…" What slipped out was 'I want you inside me'. Thyane couldn't believe he'd said that. "Well you know how big Ian is. He's that big all over. I'm still walking funny."

Derrick gasped. "You didn't!"

"I did. Or rather Ian did." And Ian was so sweet and gentle, despite his muscles and fur, that Thayne was willing to try it again. Often.

"I just want Simon to hold my wrists against the headboard and ride me." Derrick had simple tastes.

"That's it?" Simon's voice came over the phone. "This whole week. You could have just said."

A small noise and Simon's voice was louder. "Thank, Thayne. I despaired that he'd ever use words."

He hung up.

Thayne sat down his phone. Ian stepped out of the bedroom. That red silk tank top showed off his furry chest and muscled arms to perfection. Thayne hopped to his feet and brushed his fingers through Ian's beard. "I thought you wanted to go out, but here you are dressed as temptation."

Ian laughed.

"First we eat. Then we come home where you'll be in me until morning. If you're up to it." He pressed his hand to Thayne's ass.

Bottoming on Thursday had made it almost impossible to top on Friday. But Thayne would recover better with practice. And Ian had come up some amazing things they'd never tried before that didn't involve anything in anywhere.

"Do you think we should get rid of the coin?" Thayne fished it out of his pocket.

Ian snatched it up and pressed it to his lips. "This has never failed me."

He took Thayne's hand. "And neither have you."

Their kiss was long and deep. He'd have no trouble getting hard enough tonight. And no matter where the coin ended up, Thayne was the one who won the coin toss of life.

[charisstoma.livejournal.com]

A cute, funny, sweet ending.
Very well done.

[frogs_of_war]

Thanks. It gives me a minor sense of accomplishment, which doesn't make up for not even touching the keyboard yesterday. The problem with working all the time is I'm too tired to get anything done on my day off.

[onecrazycanuck.livejournal.com]

I enjoyed this mostly. The interchangeable sub and bottom bugged me a bit. While rare, there are submissive tops and dominant bottoms. A bottom is someone who enjoys the receiving position. A sub is someone who needs to submit to their partner. Submission is not necessarily about what sexual position one is in.

For a good story with a dominant bottom and submissive top read Close Protection by Cordelia Kingsbridge on Fiction Press. I know she has a LJ but I don't know her LJ handle.

[charisstoma.livejournal.com]

I love Cordelia Kingsbridge's fic. And yes I should know that dominants and tops; subs and bottoms labelling aren't totally interchangeable. Can I plead fatigue?

[onecrazycanuck.livejournal.com]

Sorry if I sounded rude or 'holier-than-thou'. It's just one of my pet peeves when someone I thought (hoped?) knew better. I was surprised to see it from you so I'm glad it was just fatigue. I'm not glad you are tired as I know that feeling all too well lately. Hope you were able to get some rest.

[charisstoma.livejournal.com]

I live for Saturdays... Sundays ... and Summers.
Yea! We survived the bad storm.