Drabble Cascade #131 - 'herring'

[charisstoma]

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Title: The Hunted (G, paranormal)
Author: charisstoma
Word count: 100

Strobe lighting slashed through the nightclub’s dimness creating seconds long images of many bodies dancing to the music’s throb. It was a perfect place to hunt, Oscar smiled to himself, all he needed to do was choose out his herring from the schooling mass.

Stroking his eyes over the dancers in search of the night’s prey, he noted where suitable dark spots were for later, preferably near an exit to an equally dark alley. Off near one of those corners a small glimmer drew his attention and he homed in on the spot.

Albert watched the approaching predator and smiled.

Yes,*sighs* there is a part 2 HERE

Comments

[mee-eep.livejournal.com]

Nice air of suspense there :D like it

[charisstoma.livejournal.com]

Thank you.
Have no idea where to take it from here, there are so many possibilities.
It's almost like a 'choose your own adventure' book where they take the story, fanning out from each plot possibility. If you'd do this then read these pages. If you'd do that then read these pages and so forth.

[mee-eep.livejournal.com]

I thought of writing one of those-ish, a speed-dating evening and then a series od if he did A hit link A, if he did B... and set the guy up with different people for romance/sex/fun/frustration.

*coughs*plotting-plunny?!

[charisstoma.livejournal.com]

Oh you should, you really should write that.
It FOUND you, *grins* not me.

[mee-eep.livejournal.com]

*whimper*

Problem would then be knowing how to tie the different storylines together to finish. hmm or just not bother with a central plot and just have it as part one - intro the characters
part two - multiple little possibilities

[thwax.livejournal.com]

OO - intriguing...I have to wait for part 2, though, I just started work! :(