Drabble Cascade #69 - 'Sandwich'

[charisstoma]

FB3X Drabble Cascade #69– “Sandwich”

Title: Summer Heat (PG, m/m)
Author: charisstoma
Word count: 100


The bus was standing room only, and the roads potholed from the unusual icy winter. His fellow passengers were sandwiched in as best they could.

“So, come here often, cutie?” a voice brushed his ear.

James wasn’t sure if the question was for him or the girl in a top, that was a surrender to the heat of the weather,on his left. The bus hit a bump and it was clear the guy behind him was interested.

The guy groaned, “Spread your legs so at least this trip can be fun.”

James leaned his head back, “Shut up, John.”

Part 2

Comments

[thwax.livejournal.com]

So, was this a chance meeting, or a deliberate encounter? And is James playing hard to get, or isn't he as interested as John? ;)

[charisstoma.livejournal.com]

*sly grin*

Summer Heat part 2 (http://charisstoma.livejournal.com/710563.html)

[mee-eep.livejournal.com]

So he knows him, otherwise I was thinking PERV *attack*

Had to re-read in a top that was a surrender to the heat of the weather three times to get it. Maybe 'wearing a top....' would be clearer or I'm not fully awake.

[charisstoma.livejournal.com]

*laughing* Totally understand. 'I' *puts nose in the air* was being poetic.

*grins* You were going to attack one of my characters. *GRINS*

[mee-eep.livejournal.com]

Very poetic LOL but my brain was not cooperating at all ;)

[charisstoma.livejournal.com]

Moved words around and put another comma in. Better?