Drabble Cascade #39 - Bid : Eyes of the Beholders (G, horror)

[charisstoma]

FB3X Drabble Cascade #39 - Bid

Title: Eyes of the Beholders (G, horror)
Author: charisstoma
Word count: 100
Prompt: Bid
Alright I was tired at the end of the school work day and in reality the black spot in the grouting was faceted. Obviously my bid for freedom was successful... unless this is being projected from the ether net.
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Bland ceramic tiles climbed the walls of the small restroom, larger tiles comprised the floor graying eroded grouting between them. For a moment he thought they’d drilled a hole in that grout but shifting his gaze the black spot gleamed like a beady eye. He searched for another eye, for generally eyes are present in plural. He had time. There was no rush.

It was as he stood, turned and flushed, that the other eye was revealed, sentinel behind where he’d sat.

“Hope you got an eyeful, asshole,” perhaps wasn’t wise to slur out in leaving.
The doorway ate him.

Comments

[seeking-galileo.livejournal.com]

You may have categorized this as horror but I laughed. I'm still laughing.

[charisstoma.livejournal.com]

*laughs* Between you and thwax.. *shakes head*

[thwax.livejournal.com]

This is Evil Dead II style horror, with a wink of humour - loved it :)

[charisstoma.livejournal.com]

This is probably not the place to say that I've never watched Evil Dead II, because um it's horror. A Wink of humor *head desk* You've no idea where my mind went with that. Other things winking.
You loved it, that's good enough for me.
Thank you.

[mee-eep.livejournal.com]

You are a strange, strange woman! but this mdeme laugh ;)

[charisstoma.livejournal.com]

You have just noticed how strange I am? *shakes head* You've been being polite all this time, haven't you.

Okay, not having watched anything but the trailer and the behind the scenes of Evil Dead 2 on Youtube.... to find out what in the world....

Please tell me that it was the outlet at the bottom of the toilet that everyone is thinking is where the other eye was located. Otherwise I'm going to wonder if I am the one surrounded by .. unusually exceptional individuals.

[mee-eep.livejournal.com]

LOL all the best people are a little strange *huggle*

I don't watch horror, don't know, don't want to know :p this is mee who reads your fics then goes to scrub her brain and think fluffy thoughts!!!! :p