Savoring Collection

[charisstoma]

Title: Savoring Collection
Author: charisstoma
Word count: 100
*cackles evilly at meep*
The Drabble Cascade continues from here



Carefully he stroked back a lock of sweat dampened hair behind a pink tinged ear. ‘Nibbling will do that,’ he smiled. Oh what a night they’d had and there’d be more, he wasn’t done in garnering in his winnings. But it paid to pace both partners in this enterprise. It was supposed to be taxing and pleasurable, the torture in the loving and wanting. A waking groan from Anthony had Stephen applying himself to sweet seduction and to placing kisses upon already reddened sensitive areas. He hadn’t yet delved deeper into his exquisitely handsome masterpiece. They’d get there, with time.

And the next part is here

Comments

[thwax.livejournal.com]

So when did you get so good at 100 word torture?

[charisstoma.livejournal.com]

*GRINS* Thank You. *GRINS*
Complements. Savoring the complements from you.

Have you noticed my pleas for continuation of some of your drabbles over at your site? I've given up but not lost all hope that some of them will evolve into a longer story.


Once, in a place far away, in a time long ago, a published author came into the bookstore where I worked. She said the most difficult part of writing was writing love scenes using different words and images for similar actions.
Alluding to the action and not so much telling it, seems to work with this series of drabbles.

[thwax.livejournal.com]

I have been noting your pleas, yes, I promise, they are on a list, I have two working into longer stories already, but I'm working on the end of a novel at the moment, so the other stories get my attention a little bit of the time.

I like your point about different words for similar actions, love scenes when you've written one, or a hundred, need some practice with different turns of phrase, and yeah, it's working!

[mee-eep.livejournal.com]

That would be our 100 word-war Charis got both very good and very evil with her fics!

We started prompt-fics too but no-one has had much time to play there.

[mee-eep.livejournal.com]

you're a tease. A wicked evil tease.

stop looking so proud of yourself

*pops of to next*

[charisstoma.livejournal.com]

Moi a tease, *grins* Why yes that might be a very good description.

You want me to stop? @u@
Your little emoticons are cute and irritating and inciting.

[mee-eep.livejournal.com]

YAY emoticons in that case.
I know I'm sadly addicted to the little happy folk.

[charisstoma.livejournal.com]

I have noticed an outbreak of the little happy folk as you call them. Did someone break the seal on the glass jar? Thought you were only supposed to rattle them around to see them jiggle.

[mee-eep.livejournal.com]

I know *shame face* I have a minor addiction, found a new site full of their smiley glory.

Ok. I can do this. I can be strong.

the smilies are back in the jar - end of.

[charisstoma.livejournal.com]

Oh that's the cutest! little one ever.

[miri-thompson.livejournal.com]

Ah, so Jade--um, I mean Stephen--won that round. I don't think Anthony is taking it too hard . . .

[charisstoma.livejournal.com]

Anthony isn't taking it too hard here because by definition Stephen hasn't inserted the hard part yet.

I don't know if Jade is Stephen or Anthony just as I don't know Everett's brother's name. I think guessing is part of the fun. It's a mystery that the mind wants to solve, kind of like this series is a teasing.

I think Everett may show up again next installment, we'll see. You put a plunny in the comment that you made last fic.
Thank you.