FB3X Drabble Cascade #4 - Auction

[charisstoma]

FB3X Drabble Cascade #4

Title: Auction (PG m/m)
Author: charisstoma
Word count: 100
Prompt: chain

Fine gold strands of links slithered over his flesh. His body playing peek-a-boo as he danced, the music in the background filled his senses and the coolness of the chains tickled where they touched and swayed against him. His mind was in a different place, separated from everything except for those things most immediate; the chains, the music, the shackles that suspended him for the viewers’ entertainment where he stood raised above the other dancers in the spot lit dimness of the club.

Someone would bid for his time this night and to the winner he’d belong … for awhile.

Comments

[mee-eep.livejournal.com]

wooo very nice, I like the tone of it, how vivid his dance and the ending '... for awhile' is a nice touch.

[charisstoma.livejournal.com]

Thank you, *grins* that for awhile... don't know if that's good or bad for him.

[mee-eep.livejournal.com]

Seems a little lonely, like despite all the attention and being won he's ultimately always alone, never touched/seen deeper/discarded.
Also independence, no one can completely own him, they only win the night.

I like it - there's a heady drugged feel to him dancing then what might be a wistful note at the end.

All this from a drabble! Lol

[beren-writes.livejournal.com]

Ooh, nice, very sensual.

[charisstoma.livejournal.com]

Thank you. *grins* I try; Note all the false starts with the Drabblerotic. Finally got one written that seems to fit. Now how to post it and where.

[thwax.livejournal.com]

That is so sensual and intimate, and just a little bit heartbreaking at the end ::sniff::

[charisstoma.livejournal.com]

Thank you. Perhaps he's content to play the field but I was wondering myself as I wrote it whether he was in the zone from the experience or drugs.

[starr_falling]

Beautiful imagery. I like that there's so many ways to interpret this, especially the ending. Nicely done.

[charisstoma.livejournal.com]

Thank you! Fun to build all the many possibilities into a drabble. Yes it is.