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charisstoma ([personal profile] charisstoma) wrote2013-05-28 09:08 pm

Drabble Cascade #12 : Darkness -- Out of the Darkness

FB3X Drabble Cascade #12 - Darkness

Drabble Cascade at FB3X - Every Tuesday



Title: Out of the Darkness (G)
Author: charisstoma
Word count: 100
Prompt: Darkness
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For 37 weeks there was the rhythmic sound for company in the darkness. Once there was plenty of room but around him space kept shrinking until it was squirm and push trying for something more comfortable. He kicked his foot petulantly against the walls in futility at his confinement. Sometimes he’d run his hand over places made harder by things outside. A light pressure usually came as a result of those movements of his, another rhythmic something he’d discovered was soothing.

Contractions happened, squeezing him, pushing him somewhere … and there was light and air for his welcomed first cry.

[identity profile] mee-eep.livejournal.com 2013-05-29 05:55 am (UTC)(link)
Prefer this drabble to the previous!!!!

[identity profile] charisstoma.livejournal.com 2013-05-29 06:00 pm (UTC)(link)
I thought I should try a positive spin. *grins*
Neither of these is as good as yours.

[identity profile] mee-eep.livejournal.com 2013-05-29 11:14 pm (UTC)(link)
LOL I'm ignoring the suggestion of what he was groping!

Awwww *blush*
I love how a single prompt can set people writing such different things :)
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[identity profile] miri-thompson.livejournal.com 2013-05-29 12:08 pm (UTC)(link)
Perfect! I suppose that's just how it felt back there in the womb . . .

[identity profile] charisstoma.livejournal.com 2013-05-29 06:03 pm (UTC)(link)
*grins* I suppose that must be it for that time before birth. But I was little and had no real frame of reference to judge by at the time.
My mom with instruction from a nurse did have to teach me how to suckle. I perhaps wasn't the most knowledgable capable kid to come out of the womb.