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charisstoma ([personal profile] charisstoma) wrote2013-12-14 08:04 pm
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Drabble Cascade failure : Breaking the Bed

Title: Breaking the Bed
Author: charisstoma
Word count: 100
For some reason I keep wanting to write to the prompt pled instead of bid. *sighs* Writer fail.
Success: Breaking the Bed In


“I can’t. I can’t anymore,” was gasped in time to the creaking of the bed.

“All most there, you can do it,” was huffed back in encouragement. Frankly, Frank didn’t know if he could, really, but he wasn’t going to tell that to Jamie.

“Frank please,” the syllables of the please were drawn out between caught in and gasped out breaths. “Can’t we stop just for a moment to rest?”

There was an ominous crackling from the bed frame that froze both of them.

“Quick. Move it,” Frank commanded frantically but the bed didn’t make it successfully up the stairs.

[identity profile] mee-eep.livejournal.com 2013-12-15 09:04 am (UTC)(link)
LOL - clever!
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[identity profile] miri-thompson.livejournal.com 2013-12-15 07:38 pm (UTC)(link)
Lol! I see what you did here . . .

[identity profile] charisstoma.livejournal.com 2013-12-15 10:57 pm (UTC)(link)
*looks innocent* They were moving this bed up the stairs. Surely everyone has done this, hopefully with better results. *continues innocent look*

[identity profile] charisstoma.livejournal.com 2013-12-15 11:06 pm (UTC)(link)
*preens* I am aren't I. *looks worried* Clever.

*happy dance*
Breaking the Bed In is now posted.
Edited 2013-12-15 23:32 (UTC)

[identity profile] mee-eep.livejournal.com 2013-12-17 07:58 pm (UTC)(link)
You are *pets you*

*Looks below* Not convinced on the innocence though!

[identity profile] charisstoma.livejournal.com 2013-12-18 04:53 am (UTC)(link)
*shifty eyes* Alright, what gave me away?